关于长城的英语作文范文
导语：长城又称万里长城，是中国古代的军事防御工程。长城修筑的历史可上溯到西周时期，发生在首都镐京(今陕西西安)的著名的典故“烽火戏诸侯”就源于此，你一定会有许多不一样的想法吧，把它记录下，来编写成英语范文吧!欢迎阅读，仅供参考，更多相关的知识，请关注CNFLA学习网的栏目!，
关于长城的英语作文：
This morning, our family in the hotel to get up early, because want to climb the Great Wall. In the intersection, we had 811 tour car, full spirit to set off the Great Wall! On the road, I saw the majestic buildings, and small buildings. Waked up like the high buildings, short building is still in bed. Watch I unconsciously fell asleep. Finally to the badaling Great Wall, we got off the car, saw on the Great Wall already has a lot of people, I thought: "what do these people are faster than us?" So say, I don't do the snail. So I soon began to climb! 2, sister first began to climb, I was not tired, but he climbed half is tired. Almost at the end. We will go on. In the process of climbing the Great Wall, I know of chairman MAO's famous words doesn't reach the Great Wall is not a good sweat. Mean; If you don't climb the Great Wall is not a good sweat. You have to climb the Great Wall. It's so happy today!
Teacher comment on: I envy the little author to climb the Great Wall at badaling oh, the level of the article is clear, small author point directly at the beginning, confessed his trip to the readers, the small of the author's writing center on top of the climb the Great Wall at badaling, little of the author's psychological activity and language here is very humor, is also in line with their own image. Finally the end of the small author direct lyrical. This article also has a shortage of place, however, the imperfection of the primary and secondary content arrangement, to climb the Great Wall at badaling process description is too simple, hope that the little author in writing should pay attention to this problem, come on.
参考翻译：
今天早上，我们一家人在宾馆早早地起床了，因为要去爬长城。到了路口，我们上了811旅游团的`车，就精神满满地向长城出发啦! 在路上，我看见了雄伟壮观的高楼，和矮小的楼房。好像高楼房睡醒了，矮楼房还在睡觉。看着看着我就不知不觉地睡着了。 终于到八达岭长城了，我们下了车，看见在长城上已经有好多人了，我想：“这些人怎么比我们来的都还快?”于是说：我可不做蜗牛。所以我很快的就开始爬啦! 妹妹第一个开始爬，我第2，开始的时候还不累，不过，爬了一半就累了。快要到终点时。我们就下去了。 在爬长城的过程中，我知道了毛主席说的一句话不到长城非好汗。意思是;如果不爬长城就不是好汗。你们一定要爬长城。 今天真快乐!
名师点评：真羡慕小作者去爬八达岭长城哦，这篇文章的层次清晰，一开始小作者直接点题，向读者交代了自己的行程，接下来小作者的写作重心放在了爬八达岭长城上面去了，这里小作者的心理活动和语言很幽默，也很符合自己的形象。最后的结尾小作者直接抒情。不过这篇文章也有不足的地方，主次内容的安排不够完善，对于爬八达岭长城的过程的描写过于简单，希望小作者在以后的写作中要注意这一问题，加油。
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